Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Mr Vietnam

Hi, Mr Vietnam. 
Quite pleased we met tonight
Not just I, but you, as well
If I can read a map alright

Your emotional generosity
underhanded, gratefully pocketed
Torn, I think you noticed
My endeavors at un-hearted

Your cute honesty, refreshing
soaked by my spongy soul
fresh humour and simplicity
a delight 
money slash drama slash dancing hole.

Oh! Your flickering light
grew brighter with each stroke
and self and peace and unity
in places often broke

To wait six months or eight
or maybe just days, few
there's no dot in your name
because I'm not done with you

Mr Vietnam 



the sabra said...

Man, this piece is so awesome. My usual double play :)

the sabra said...

Agreed, again :)