Wednesday, June 02, 2010

When Your Heart Shattered

when your heart shattered
the splinters entered mine
now bleeding from the shards
my strength is draining
whither goest my strength, if not to you?
Mion T. Earz

5 comments:

the sabra said...

Like I just told Chaya, 'splinters' and 'shards' ought to be swapped (definiton and stuff wise) but it came out this way and i also like the beat so for now it's gonna stay.

C said...

I still think it's perfect.

the sabra said...

Thank you.

the sabra said...

Now that same heart is angry that she broke for naught.

AHEM AHEM AHEM. THE HULK!?

the sabra said...

Oh I love this poem.