Monday, August 06, 2007

search for a doctor (canceled)

i was searching for a doctor
a good one
one that would know everything

cuz first i had a problem
and i beseeched Gd to remove it
and then it dawned on me i need to go to a doctor

so i went to one doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew muscles

so i went to another doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew stomachs

so i went to another doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew spines

so i went to another doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew feet

so i went to another doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew bones

so i went to another doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew hearts

so i went to another doctor
but advice was given from only his point of view
he knew skin

i was searching for a doctor
a good one
one that would know everything-skin, hearts, bones, feet, spines, stomachs, muscles.

but that was a problem
it dawned on me that i gotta give up on doctors
and i beseeched Gd to remove it


remove it, Gd


(draft)

4 comments:

the sabra said...

no, you don't get it

Avi said...
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Scraps said...

I hope everything's okay...

esther said...

Your back pains? Or is it metaphorical? Or both?